Friday 2 July 2010

she was amazing - flash fiction friday

It was meant to be a 3some, he was meant to be there to fuck both of us but at the eleventh hour he cancelled. Neither of us had been just one on one with a woman, both of us were aroused and not wishing to waste the night. We talked, drank and giggled. I offered to take some pictures of her, I wanted her naked.

As she undressed I kissed her, I was trembling, she kissed me back so perfectly.
We stood breast to breast naked anticipating what would happen next.

I leant to take her nipple in my mouth and cupped her sex in my hand, teasing the lips open, her breath caught in her throat as I parted her and delved into her wetness.

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2nd pic was from my first full experience one on one with a woman. She was amazing.








The challenge for this Fridaywas to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 72-172 words. Additionally, I'd like to see you use the following phrase somewhere in the submission:

"...her breath caught in her throat..."

Go see who else played http://eroticflashfiction.blogspot.com/

5 comments:

  1. I'm pretty sure you were amazing,too. Love the FF!

    Safe(FUN!)travels, hun!

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  2. Loved the story, and the second pic - just lovely!

    xx Dee

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  3. Oh, that was awesome!!! Great piece. :)

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  4. Very seductive....
    The pics enhance your words so much.

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