Friday, 9 July 2010

Driven, beaten, hammered - Flash Fiction Friday

the challenge for this Friday was to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 48-148 words. I also provided a key phrase for use somewhere in the submission:

"...driven, beaten, hammered..."


Staggering back to the apartment, drunk and laughing, the skies lit up along with the first crash of thunder. The heavens opened. There was nowhere to hide from the rain, she slipped and took him down with her. One moment they were laughing lay on the ground and then as the locked eyes, lips and hips followed. As the skies lit up again he was ensuring her pussy lips we parted and his cock was driven, beaten, hammered deep inside her.

10 comments:

  1. Damn, girl! That is HOT!

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  2. Great job. Sexy and spontaneous is the best. Wishing it were my lips being parted.....

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  3. Intense attraction; love it!!

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  4. short and very hot

    *faning self*

    -H

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  5. Happy you joined us this week! Thanks for playing along.

    -- PB

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  6. Ohhh! Ahhh! I love that last line in particular. ;-)

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  7. she took him down with her....

    Never let him go....

    Loved the post.

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  8. It felt very spontaneous as I was reading it, which suited the subject matter so well. Playful but sexy, very nice.

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  9. Mmm, nice story. Full of passion.

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