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Friday, 9 July 2010

Driven, beaten, hammered - Flash Fiction Friday

the challenge for this Friday was to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 48-148 words. I also provided a key phrase for use somewhere in the submission:

"...driven, beaten, hammered..."


Staggering back to the apartment, drunk and laughing, the skies lit up along with the first crash of thunder. The heavens opened. There was nowhere to hide from the rain, she slipped and took him down with her. One moment they were laughing lay on the ground and then as the locked eyes, lips and hips followed. As the skies lit up again he was ensuring her pussy lips we parted and his cock was driven, beaten, hammered deep inside her.
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10 comments:

  1. nitebyrd9 July 2010 at 18:27

    Damn, girl! That is HOT!

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  2. Luna Mauvaise10 July 2010 at 00:43

    Nicely done! Happy Friday.

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  3. Playfully Yours10 July 2010 at 10:47

    Great job. Sexy and spontaneous is the best. Wishing it were my lips being parted.....

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  4. Anonymous10 July 2010 at 12:44

    Intense attraction; love it!!

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  5. Anonymous10 July 2010 at 12:59

    short and very hot

    *faning self*

    -H

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  6. The Panserbjørne12 July 2010 at 15:52

    Happy you joined us this week! Thanks for playing along.

    -- PB

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  7. Anonymous12 July 2010 at 16:45

    Ohhh! Ahhh! I love that last line in particular. ;-)

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  8. Advizor5413 July 2010 at 00:13

    she took him down with her....

    Never let him go....

    Loved the post.

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  9. Naughty Lexi13 July 2010 at 02:16

    It felt very spontaneous as I was reading it, which suited the subject matter so well. Playful but sexy, very nice.

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  10. Red15 July 2010 at 00:26

    Mmm, nice story. Full of passion.

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